FlatTire Posted April 6 Share Posted April 6 Are you new, no I am Er Niu, Surely you jest, no my bro here is the best Is he the king, no he is Xu Qing You have lost the plot, I try so others may cry! 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlatTire Posted April 6 Share Posted April 6 (edited) In times of need, In times of greed, Daoists of a creed, fight till they bleed, For hope they plead, play a flute made of reed, Not much they need, just hope to be freed. Context: An ode for people stuck in the sanctuary with Duanmu Zang Flute is ref Xu Qing playing the flute for them. Edited April 6 by FlatTire Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hairofkenshin Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Devils seek truth while Gods crave justice and Demons must transform while Immortals can bloom above this; the will of the Ghost can be felt by them all but is there more to that tale than a tragic fall? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungry Marmoset Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) By this junior's tongue, a senior's butterfly will stir; Finally, a chance to prove - no need for fur! - Wu "Beast King" Jianwu, c. 575 Edited April 7 by Hungry Marmoset Mispelling 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue_Fire_Lotus Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 A Violet crow flies on silent wings, The Eagle will soon feed other things, Birds of many feathers shall soon return home, But the origin shall not be the same. Context: Xu QIng's fairy tale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marulo30 Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Gods and emperors rise and fall But at the end the timescape is green Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkesharwani Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 In lands of fantasy, Bai Xiaochun roams, A will eternal, in heart and in tomes. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkesharwani Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Through tumbling realms, Captain and Xu Xing soar, In quests untold, their bond forevermore. 1 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
knaveoforange Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Our dearest white snake would give Xu Qing her life; But will Yanyan and Plumdark let her be his wife?l Ling'er is in love, and it's quite unconditional; Ancient Spirit and human? A bit untraditional! 4 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thedesent Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) In ages past we waited ages for news of latest to arrive. Now we still await our pages, But swiping down's replaced F5! Edited April 7 by thedesent 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tam Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) A strut around the city to look; with Xu around the bill's afoot! A dreamer, a rapscallion he dares to be! Captain My Captain! What food is Hē! Title: The Bro Ode 😉 Edited April 7 by Tam 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tam Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) Troublers rise to stir amok, a tide over the city. Fortune smiles, it bears a Qing! ...His bearing oddly pretty. The task at hand, oh quite the shame, it wasn't something more. Forget a tide, to seal the seas! To him? - hardly a chore! Edited April 7 by Tam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LorinBucur Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 as the northern wind sways branches to its own desire, so too, do daoists in the jianghu together conspire 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 A night so dark no end in sight, the sun dares not speak of light a man a hero a star appears, the darkness recedes, away melt the fears 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freedomx Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) Oh dearest past forget me not, For with you, my ship sails to Unfinished mountains a captain sails, Dual weddings bow Wu Jianwu grins at a cougar named Rosyclouds Edited April 7 by freedomx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 The immortal breathes life in the flute of old She sings of the past memories none is told Reflected in the rain is a boy lost and mute The darkness the rain the tears of the flute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) A snake as pale as snow, a string on the wrist in tow, The darkness consumes all, but the thread will forever glow Edited April 7 by Dragongineer 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) I hear laughter, sighs, and crunching sounds, There's a mad dog here who knows no bounds, He plans and bites and shows his smarts The eldest brother of all our hearts Edited April 7 by Dragongineer 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 The Kid, the shadow, the skewer version two The Captain, the idiot, the meatshield, the boo Crimson is their path with blood Those who want rain must accept the mud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragongineer Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 16 hours ago, littleswan said: He's the eldest yet a big child at heart; he brags and battles, fearing defeat by his youngest' lucks and smarts. Omg whaaaaat, I just made a poem and came to look at other people's submissions, how did we both make such similar lines🤯🤯 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CFT Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 To join the poetry jam I need pentameter, alas my light is only one meter 😂 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
udohelios Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 (edited) 7 hours ago, Tam said: A strut around the city to look; with Xu around the bill's afoot! A dreamer, a rapscallion he dares to be! Captain My Captain! What food is Hē! Title: The Bro Ode 😉 Oh captain, my captain look we have entered our investment, Seven bloody peaks hails us, A nose on a pedestal greats us, Captain, my captain, my boat is wrecked...all i got for a reply is: The sound of a peach being eaten. Looking towards seeing your dharma boat Edited April 7 by udohelios Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OjSan Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Out of options, his iron will still unbroken, Full of daring, he casts Dharmaship Explosion! 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmbss Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 Looking to the moon in red, As he clenched his fist in hatred, Through the path full of woes, As he face powerful foes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tam Posted April 7 Share Posted April 7 I woke and arose; Gauze covered the 'scape, before nightfall violet grants an escape! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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