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  • Chapter 16: On The Verge The Arachnid Beast attacked! It's purple tongue shot out, creating a clapping sound as it retracted back in instantly. A white beam-like substance traveled across the approximate 300 meters between John, not stopping as it p…
  • Chapter 15: Life Gate and Arachnid BeastTilo Hae did not dare to underestimate John again. He had seen John's capabilities first hand and was now beginning to understand where John got his confidence from. To have 37 Energy Gates open naturally was …
  • Hope you guys are enjoying the story!!
  • Chapter 14: The 42 Energy Gates[spoiler] After agreeing to teach John the Nature's Flow technique, Tilo Hae didn't want to waste any time. Without delay, he began shooting John with information in the calm breeze of the evening, "This is an extremel…
  • Chapter 13: Willpower to learn Nature's Flow[Spoiler] Immediately after John broke through into the 4th Realm of the Transitional Realm, he left the hotel. He then went to some shops and bought some food to last him until he reached Nui, the town in…
  • Chapter 12: Old Man Fiji[spoiler] This familiar voice could only belong to the announcer of the tournament!  John used his Observation to see if there was anyone else, but it was only the announcer. Without wasting another second, he pushed the woo…
  • Chapter 11: Official Trade Guild Tilo Hae had stayed silent most of the time healing John's wound,  except for when John slightly lost control and caused the wound to open again.  It took about 15 minutes for John to finish and in that time Tilo Hae…
  • Chapter 10: John's Past "It all happened three years ago in 1862. I was 13 at the time and was practicing my swordsmanship. I don't have any siblings so I had a lot of attention from mother. I was in the early stages of the Neophyte Realm which I wa…
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  • Chapter 9: Spirit Bond John was a respectful person. He believed in mutual respect and would respect those who respected him. However, if people were to treat him unfairly and in an impertinent manner, he would reciprocate. When people attempted to …
  • Chapter 8: Emily Heroe  killing intent began enveloping the Heavenly Katana. It was obvious that the name 'Emily Heroe' was of great importance to John.  The Wolf was surprised for a second. The sudden change in character and atmosphere was too over…
  • Chapter 7: Emily Heroe's Heavenly Katana and the Heaven's Sword "AWWWOOOOOOHHH!!!!!!" a ferocious howl reverberated causing John's ear drums to almost burst open. The power of the howl caused the sand and small stones to fly up into the air and star…
  • Chapter 6: Spirit Sword  "Indeed, you have won!" announced the frail old man. He didn't seem affected by the scene at all and talked in a normal tone. He then slowly got up using a walking a stick and climbed down a spiral stair case around 150 mete…
  • Chapter 5: Silenced! "WHAT!?!?!" growled Barry as he smashed his teeth together. His single word had broken the silence of disbelief. Everyone was staring wide eyed at John, who was standing nonchalantly on the Leveliser.   "IMPOSSIBLE!!! THERE MUS…
  • Chapter 4: Rumble Tournament  Hmph! Stupid weaklings making me do work thought John. He hated fighting weak people as it was a waste of time, but if they annoyed him he had to teach them the consequences; thus he took a few seconds out of his day to…
  • Chapter 3: Bloodless Slaughter "Hahahaha!!" sniggered the tear drop tattoo man as he turned away from John, "You kill us?! You must be stupider than I thought. I initially was going to let you off after you handed your katana and bag, but it seems l…
  • Chapter 2: Heavenly Katana In the south of Lemuria, Infineta is a small town known as Uuku. Uuku is an extremely small place with only a few thousand citizens. It should have been long gone but has survived due to the large and mysterious cave in it…