AWE typos, continuity and other mistakes (no need for ISSTH reports, they will be caught in editing)

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  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/awe-index/
    A Will Eternal is a xianxia webnovel by popular Chinese xianxia writer Ergen. -> A Will Eternal is a xianxia webnovel by popular Chinese xianxia writer Er Gen.
  • AWE 66: At tremor ran through the young man, and when he realized that Bai Xiaochun’s garments were stained with blood, he gasped. “You’re… you’re not dead?!?!”

    At -> A
  • AWE 84: Elder Zhou could help but wonder… if he had pushed Bai Xiaochun a bit too far.

    could -> couldn't
  • AWE 138: He didn’t have any schemes, just a strong desire that the beast keep on living.

    keep -> keeps
  • edited March 12
    Not really a typo, but all the chapters with hidden titles seem to start with [/expand] (e.g. AWE 147 or 155].
    Probably something to do with the new site.

    Edit: AWE 166 seems to be missing the hidden title at the top of the chapter entirely?

    Also links to other chapters result in a 404 because the new website. (e.g. AWE 173 linking to chapters 161 & 64)

    Edit: silly me for posting that many new comments instead of editing one.

    AWE 174: The third will allow you to enter the Ancestral Darktunnel to select the legacy that is your right now that you’ve reached Foundation Establishment.

    your -> yours

    AWE 221: “No wonder the Pill Stream Sect has tried so hard over the years to get that wall fragment back. If the Daoist Blood Sage hadn’t expressed his dying order to never return the wall for all eternity, it would probably have been sent back long ago.”

    Not a typo, but the daoist feels rather distant and objectified, especially considering it's someone from their own sect.

    Also the titles at the top of the pages seem to be missing apostrophes. Probably something to do with the new site? Some examples:
    Chapter 234: It Really Wont Explode?
    Chapter 235: Plaguedevils Here
    Chapter 243: Nightcrypt, I'm Jia Lie, And Youre Dead!
    That last one is a bad odd now I look at it, since it does have a apostrophe while lacking another, maybe they are typos?
  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/novel/a-will-eternal

    Book 3: Rise of the River Defying Sect Section is missing and the current Book 3 section is supposed to be book 4: A Different Kind of Hostage!


  • AWE 440
    > Some of them had changed their tune a bit after he got into the top 400

    Should be top 500
  • edited April 10
    AWE 326: All eyes were focused on that towering figures which blotted out even the sun!
    figures -> figure

    AWE 342: [1. There are many different versions of what the “heavenly kings” look like. Here is one depiction of the famous “four heavenly kings” of Buddhism]
    Dead link

    AWE 357: However, the crazed look in his eye left the little turtle with a bad feeling.
    eye -> eyes? unless it's a single eye, which would be a bit odd

    AWE 505: “If he’d possesesd frigid qi of this level before, he would have been able to fight his way back to safety much more easily than he did.”
    possesesd -> possessed

    AWE 509: When he was done, he stood there staring at Bai Lin with wide eyes with a look that said, I'm your subordinate, you have to help me!
    I'm your subordinate, you have to help me -> I'm your subordinate, you have to help me (not everything in italic)

    AWE 538: sBai Xiaochun was getting very anxious, and was about to look for other cultivators to hide behind when he realized that everyone was struggling to get away from him, leaving him completely exposed.
    sBai -> Bai
  • Minor, but:

    AWE 497: "Unfortunately, considering how he was being pinned down by the red-garbed young woman, there was little he could do reverse the situation." -> "...he could do to reverse the situation."
  • Chapter 143:
    “I hope so too,” Bia Xiaochun replied. Looking around to make sure no one was listening, he leaned over with a scowl and said, “Hey, do you think the other disciples did this on purpose...? I originally wanted to stay in the back. How come I ended up in the front all of a sudden?”
    Bia Xiaochun should be Bai Xiaochun lol; so:
    “I hope so too,” Bai Xiaochun replied. Looking around to make sure no one was listening, he leaned over with a scowl and said, “Hey, do you think the other disciples did this on purpose...? I originally wanted to stay in the back. How come I ended up in the front all of a sudden?”


  • What's up with the first paragraph of the chapter?


  • Another one

  • 2 more of these and I might start compiling all of these in a spreadsheet and share the link...

  • this is the last one I found
  • YuzzzzuY said:
    AWE 326: All eyes were focused on that towering figures which blotted out even the sun!
    figures -> figure

    AWE 342: [1. There are many different versions of what the “heavenly kings” look like. Here is one depiction of the famous “four heavenly kings” of Buddhism]
    Dead link

    AWE 357: However, the crazed look in his eye left the little turtle with a bad feeling.
    eye -> eyes? unless it's a single eye, which would be a bit odd

    AWE 505: “If he’d possesesd frigid qi of this level before, he would have been able to fight his way back to safety much more easily than he did.”
    possesesd -> possessed

    AWE 509: When he was done, he stood there staring at Bai Lin with wide eyes with a look that said, I'm your subordinate, you have to help me!
    I'm your subordinate, you have to help me -> I'm your subordinate, you have to help me (not everything in italic)

    AWE 538: sBai Xiaochun was getting very anxious, and was about to look for other cultivators to hide behind when he realized that everyone was struggling to get away from him, leaving him completely exposed.
    sBai -> Bai
    It's idiomatic to use "the look in (someone's) eye"
    The reason "have" is not in italics is that it's being emphasized. With normal text, you use italics to emphasize something, in a line of text that is in italics, it's the opposite.
  • Hey everyone, all mistakes should be fixed now, thanks as usual. 
  • AWE 622: Im Only Doing This To Save You, Old Pal
    Im -> I'm

    AWE 622: With that, he pulled out... and Aphrodisiac Pill, which he then placed into the giant ghost king’s mouth.
    and -> an
  • I've yet to read ISSTH. Is it worthwhile for me to wait until it is released in a published format? Obviously I'd prefer to read it in a more polished manner, but I'd also like to start reading as soon as I can.  Thanks @Deathblade
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