DKK: Defying the King of Kings
Message from the noob author:
Notice this story senpais haha. This is my very first story (I just finished writing the draft of the third chapter cause it was only a while ago that an idea suddenly hit the back of my head) and so I was conflicted whether to post this in the website that gathers breathtaking stories or to wait until the time when writing stories feels as easy as breathing air. Anyway, thank you for viewing this discussion (Really, thank you) even if you didn’t read any. *bows* Oh! By the way, please comment your thoughts and please say if you like the plot of the story or not cause if even one person like this, I’ll continue it despite having haters (I HOPE NOT. PLEASE GO EASY ON ME.) I’m saying sorry in advance if there are a lot of grammatical errors because English is not my first language.
Summary: (This is not really a summary for me haha)
Only if one is strong enough that one could voluntarily throw away the immortal gifts one had received when one was born and truly find the thrill of life by experiencing hardships and by walking on the path to be a true Immortal.
The youth dropped to his knees in a flash and slammed his head to the floor producing a loud thud. Even though the wound from the impact instantly healed as soon as it appeared, contrasting his fair skin, there were still small traces of wet blood that showed how strong
the impact was.
“Father… I know you understand me. Immortals who are born Immortals are said to be the chosen ones because they hold in their hands ethereal gifts bestowed upon them by the Heavens but I and you, father, disagree! They lead an empty life with the power they didn’t get themselves and the riches they know they don’t deserve. They became an immortal without experiencing the happiness mortals feel when they become one. I want to experience a life where I was weaker yesterday. I prefer to have battles against stronger opponents where my life is always at stake rather than idly sitting on a throne. I want to become stronger on my own and to feel fulfilled of the accomplishments I got from hardships. Father, I choose to be a mortal and take the road of becoming a true Immortal!” pleaded the youth as he raised his head up while his pair of eyes stared at his father’s.
Bang! He once again slammed his head to the floor. “Please… accommodate your selfish son’s only wish.” begged the youth in a resolute manner.
Book 1: Immortal’s dwelling (still not finished)
Chapter 1: The Governor of All
Chapter 2: Erecting Territories (draft)
Chapter 3: Foolish Questions (draft)
Chapter 4: Showing his Conviction (draft)
Chapter 5: A Brave Soul (draft)