Lord Of The Cosmos (Coiling Dragon fanfiction)

edited December 6 in Fanfiction
Hello guys.
Basically this story is about the transmigration of a modern guy into the coiling Dragon World with a four way soul mutation and a system. 
What laws will train in,and what impact will he have on our MC?
Hope You Enjoy it.


  • Chapter 1: Rebirth

    One of the eighty one prefectures of the Netherworld realm, Osborn Prefecture located in the north, nearby a Nether blood pond.

    The huge translucent Wraith returned to the Nether Blood Pond that it had guarded for millions of years. It had completed its inspection rounds around this Nether blood pond and continued to lie by this pond motionless. There is nothing about this Nether Blood Pond that could attract its attention.

    These Nether Blood ponds were scattered all over the Netherworld and was a valuable resource for prefecture Lords constantly providing them with undead that would be used as cannon fodders in their many battles. Whenever a soul enters the Netherworld realm from material Planes or higher planes, they would first be cleansed by the Laws of the Netherworld Realm in these Blood ponds and be born as various kinds of undead like undead skeletons, foul zombies, undead Lich, Undead Wight etc. Therefore the Prefecture Lords assigned trusted Demi-God level deities to guard these ponds.

    This Translucent Wraiths was a Demi-God level undead that guarded this pond on behalf of the Osborn Prefecture Lord. After completing its daily mission, it lay down by the Abyss Blood Pond slowly swallowing the strength of the Nether Blood Pond. Even though the waters in the Abyss Blood Pond could constantly enhance the strength of the Translucent Wraith, it had a major defect; it severely eroded intelligence. That was why despite being a Demi-God level; this undead had still not awakened its memories.

    Usually this Translucent Wraith only remembered events that occurred over a twenty four hour period. After sleeping and waking up the next day, it would forget everything. But this wasn’t important to it. All it cared about was waking up, completing its frequent inspection runs, and then coming to absorb energy from the Nether waters.

    It little pays attention to other matters.  Although the Translucent Wraith has reached the Demi God level, its Intelligence is even inferior to the lowest level undead skeleton.  The memory left in its long life leaving is few, but it performs its mission as an instinct.

    A bright light from the Nether Blood Pond attracted the attention of the Translucent Wraith. It moved its huge body, stopped swallowing the Nether blood pond energy, and begun to closely observe this peculiar crystal cocoon that had appeared from the Nether blood pond.

    An Undead was about to be born! But the birth process of this undead was very peculiar. It was absorbing more energy than usual. However this Wraith did not care about this. All it cared about was performing its duties. So after waiting for an hour, an Undead Skeleton finally emerged from the cocoon.

    The Translucent Wraith immediately spread its soul sense to cover this newly born Skeleton and conveyed its order,

    “Leave Here! Go, slaughter, and evolve! Stay behind……. Death”

    This command was simple enough for even the simple minded undead skeletons to understand. This Undead Skeleton couldn’t stay here. Undead are born at very low levels and depending on their talents, as long as they swallow enough souls, it will evolve into saint level. That was why these undead were not allowed to stay by the Nether Blood Pond where new undead are constantly born. This would be unfair to the newly born undead.

    But Sauron was looking at this undead Wraith dumbly. He simply didn’t understand what had happened to him.

    Every time he tried to comprehend anything that was happening around him, his mind was assaulted by a data stream 0’s and 1’s; flashes of intense pain made his brain feel that it were bursting open. His awareness of his body was very weak; it was as if an electric field were going through him and an electronic current disturbing his body. Although he could hear and feel everything outside, he couldn’t do anything. He couldn’t even move a finger!

     “Not good! I need to wake up! I must wake up!”

    Although he doesn’t know why he was reborn into this mysterious world, Sauron knew that he needed to wake up. The aura and murderous intention from the present undead was forcing him to stay focused. Finally, fear of death allowed him to move his body and crawl from the Nether Blood pond.

    Looking at the newly born undead crawling away, the Translucent Wraith shook its head and closed its eyes again to sleep. But it didn’t know that this weak newly born undead skeleton would spark events that would shake the entire universe.


    After crawling some distance away, Sauron finally stopped and waited for the intense pain to subside. Sauron’s mind was still filled with the jumbles of infinite 0’s and 1’s; the current caused his body to jump. He could vaguely remember some of his past life’s events, and then they were mixed with some vague memories.

    “Painful! So painful!” The pain was tearing at his soul, he gradually recalled the accident that happened when he logged into the Virtual game Chaos Era. This game was very popular with their technological breakthrough which had reached 100% and held a loyal fan base of 70%.

    This lead to a tremendous response from Earth’s societies! It started to attract millions of people to enter; Sauron was also drawn in at the time, even praising the game store for their magical method in distributing with a wide array of spaces filled with copies of game cartridges.

     At the time his consciousness had entered the virtual space, there seemed to be a problem with the power system in his building which caused the VR headset to explode. Innumerable electric sparks flashed, it seemed like his soul would be crushed by lightning!  At the critical moment he felt a golden light suddenly emerge from nowhere and envelope him. Everything went dim at this time.  The next thing he knew, he had been reborn here.

    After waiting for a whole two hours, the pain finally stopped. But his mind was still blurry from scattered memories. These were memories from the original soul which was supposed to have been born as an Undead Skeleton but his soul fused with it and was reborn instead. Organizing his memories, he finally understood his current situation. The original soul that he fused was a saint level magician who specialized in Fate Magic from one of the lower realms. These memories as well as his current predicament made him realize the world he had been reborn in.

    He was currently in Netherworld Realm which was a higher level plane of the Coiling dragon Universe. As he was trying to learn more about his current situation, the data stream gathered and projected an image in front of his eyes.

    Name Sauron Brondel
    Race Undead (Rank 1)
    Shape Skeleton (Level 0)
    Basic Attributes
    Strength 10
    Agility 9
    Physique 12
    Spirit(Soul) 17 ( Four Way Soul Mutate )
    Energy Points 0/5
    Sword Skills None
    Hand Skills Skeleton Claw Strike [Initial Mastery]
    Movement Skill None
    Specialities Sword Paragon, Extraordinary Body
    Skill Mastery Levels Initial, Advanced, Complete


    “This is?!”

    When he saw this attribute panel he was very surprised since this was the attribute panel used in Chaotic Era!

    No wonder for a whole day he saw 0’s and 1’s appearing so many times. When the accident happened at that time, the stream of in-game data also transmitted his consciousness. Now opening his eyes, it seems the dense and numerous data streams have at present thoroughly fused into his mind.

    He finally calmed his mind and studied his attributes.

    These were basically attributes of beginner level Undead. Even though undead skeletons were the lowest level of undead, their strength also vastly surpassed ordinary people. They have very good resistance to electric shock, toxins, corrosive acid and cold. They also automatically understand the Universal language upon birth as well as comprehend soul sense beyond 100 feet which helps them sense enemies and communicate. If it wasn’t for their very low intelligence, they could be considered very powerful. That was why many players chose this race for its obvious advantages.

    Looking at the panel displaying his attributes which had been reduced to beginner level, being someone who was one of the ten God Class player in the Chaotic era reality Virtual game being a Death Swordsman having mastered several Divine Level Sword Techniques, of course he was frustrated with his current attributes. But he had to make do.

    What made him excited was that somehow he had developed a four way soul mutate during his rebirth and also carried along his Sword paragon Specialty with him to this world. This Specialty made him a monster in sword comprehension and was a major factor that contributed to his rise to God Class in Chaotic Era! With these two as well as his massive battle experience he believed that in no time, he would stand at the top of this world and investigate how he was born into this world.

    Having organized his thoughts, he immediately began to practice the only skill he had now; Skeleton Claw Strike.

    With his astonishing combat effectiveness and soul strength, it didn’t take him long for him to practice this skill of its peak stage which increased his attack by three times. With this, he believed he could at least survive among the lower Undead.

  • edited November 27
    I'll try to post one chapter a day on weekdays and three chapters on weekends meaning eight chapters in a week. Expecting comments and suggestions from you. 
  • Chapter 2: First Fight and Evolution


    The Osborn prefecture as one of the eighty one prefectures of the Netherworld realm is a place where one can easily find Netherworld bloody battles.

    The area of this prefecture is very big. With various Demi God level Undead laying claim to various parses of land calling themselves territory lords. To fight for the limited resources in these territories, these Demi-Gods engage in bloody battles. This has caused the high demand for cannon folder which can be used to wear out enemy forces. Low level undead usually serve as the best source of cannon fodder for such low level battles.

    Osborn prefecture alone has over I billion of this undead only about 1% will advance to high level and even saint level. These low level undead are usually driven away by high level undead to be used as cannon fodder immediately after birth to consume the enemy.

    The newborn common skeleton, Sauron walked forward slowly examining the memory of the saint level soul which he had fused upon rebirth.

    “Hmm?” Sauron was immediately alerted when he noticed some low level undead skeletons and undead Wraith walking towards him. Suddenly stopping in his tracks, he stood there waiting for these undead to get to him.

    After some time, four undead skeletons and an undead Wraith appeared before him. It seemed the skeletons were subdued by the wraith as they followed behind the Wraith like retinues.

    This Undead Wraith seems to have advanced in its rank and having gained the innate skill [Summon], was gathering skeletons to be used as its minions.

    “What is your name?” the Undead Wraith asked Sauron. Even though it was asking this it had already revealed its intentions by making its minions surround Sauron.

    “Sauron!” he answered calmly not showing any kind of panic from being surrounded. This surprised the Wraith a lot since it usually does not see such expressions from low level skeletons.

    High level Undead needs slaves, massive slaves. Any number of servants can sell at high prices to others, so long as they are captured. As long as an undead is captured, either it is used as cannon fodder in the many Netherworld battles or sold as servants. The two most notorious Undead that engage in this business are the High level night Witches and Ghost Woman.

    The netherworld is a very chaotic place. These night Witches and Ghost Women are seen everywhere. They are very parsimonious, evil, cruel and crafty creatures.if you can obtain their commitments, then they will keep their commitment every so often. The night witches and Ghost Women are the Netherworld’s famous slave traders who deal with Demi-God level territory lord. So many Undead usually capture low level undead and sell them to theses slave traders for higher currency and other favors. It seemed that this Ancient Wraith also deals in this business because at its level it can only control three servants. So gathering so many minions is obviously to sell.

    In recent years, the need for slaves had increased leading undead to engage in this business.

    “Sauron, submit to me!” the dark red Wraith was staring Sauron and said in the form of an order. “As Nouska’s servant, you can obtain more food as well as quick advancement.”

    So long as Sauron agreed, he would sign a Nether contract which is binding to all beings below high God. It will then sell it to the Ghost Woman.

    “Submit to you?” Sauron looked at this Undead Wraith with ridicule. How can he submit to such a low level being? This expression immediately made Nouska angry. It decided to teach this ignorant skeleton a lesson then later force it to sign a Nether Contract.

    With Nouska’s instruction, an undead skeleton who was holding a sword immediately charged at Sauron waving his sword at Sauron’s shoulder. They didn’t want to kill him yet; just maim him enough to be able to sell to the Ghost Woman.

    However as the sword was about to hit his shoulder, Sauron twisted his body to his right dodging the sword strike. He immediately wielding his claws and struck out.

    “Skeleton Claw Strike!”


    The claw hit the skeleton’s head causing it to instantly explode. The fight that just started had ended just as quickly. The moment the skeleton died a notification appeared in front of Sauron’s eyes.

    System Notification!
    Converting Energy Points. You obtained 5 Energy Points.
    Beginning Bloodline Evolution…..
    Bloodline Evolution Completed. Host had experienced a Variation. Shape ability promoted to [Elite Skeleton Soldier]. Death Battle Qi Activated.
    Reward : Steel Sword [+1] + Preliminary Death Swordsmanship!

    Sauron was gazing at his present enemies. Golden energy suddenly flowed into him strengthening his bones. His whole body that was composed of bones suddenly began to emit a metallic sheen. It was obviously stronger than before. He also felt a grey substance start brewing in his bones.

    Undead Mutation is so astonishing. In just a blink of an eye, Sauron experienced a sudden surge of strength.

    “Death Battle Qi?” Sauron was surprised by this discovery. How can a creature that didn’t have flesh and blood generate battle Qi? Is there something special about this body that he inherited? He thought about it and finally decided to give up pursuing this issue or now. There were so many inexplicable things about this Undead Skeleton body that he inherited. He will surely investigate further when he got stronger.

    “What!” Nouska was startled at how Sauron had disposed of his strongest slave and had abruptly experienced an evolution. This undead Wraith was actually a timid creature so he had now lost interest in subduing this Sauron and thinking of ways to withdraw.

    “Everybody, Attack! He is just one person. As long as we overwhelm him we can win.” He immediately shouted to his slaves and stepped back himself. The three remaining slaves immediately umped at Sauron wielding their claws at him.

    But their leader, Nouska had turned around and began to run away. He was surprisingly fast for a Wraith. The Undead Skeletons suddenly realized that they had been set up but it way too late to escape.

    “[Death Sword]-[First Stance]!”

    The grey battle Qi immediately enveloped the sword and slashed out releasing a flying slash attack instantly beheading all three undead skeletons. Their heads rolled away with their bodies crashing onto the floor. He had killed all three Undead with just one slash of his.

    Sauron casually glanced at the system notification displaying his current ills. Killing these low level undead with a single slash wasn’t something surprising for him. Being one of the ten God-ranked player s among hundreds of thousands of players, his rich combat experience was unquestionable. Despite using only a preliminary sword skill, disposing these undead who hadn’t practiced any martial arts wasn’t something challenging.

    He immediately brought up his current stats.

    Name Sauron Brondel
    Race Undead (Rank 1)
    Shape Elite Skeleton Soldier (Level 1-Initial Stage)
    Basic Attributes
    Strength 12
    Agility 11
    Physique 13
    Spirit(Soul) 18 ( Four Way Soul Mutate )
    Energy Points 15/50
    Battle Qi 8/10
    Sword Skills Preliminary Death Swordsmanship - (Initial Mastery) [+15]
    Hand Skills Skeleton Claw Strike [Initial Mastery]
    Movement Skill None
    Specialities Sword Paragon, Extraordinary Body
    Skill Mastery Levels Initial, Advanced, Complete
    [Click on attribute to view description]

    Looking at his current stats, Sauron thought aloud, “Really small and weak!”

    He had received two points to both his strength and speed and one to his spirit and his physique. Compared to his stats as a God Class player, this was truly weak. And also even though he activated somehow Battle Qi but he amount was really pitiful. Just that attack from the lowest level of the preliminary sword skill had consumed two points. Meaning he could only use only five attacks. It seems he will have to find ways to improve his battle Qi Capacity later. But looking at the new notification at the bottom of his attribute he nodded happily

    “It seems as my level improves, the function of the system also improves.”

    He immediate decided to check on his Four Way Soul Mutate attribute. He had wondered how this happened because he didn’t have this in his previous life.

    System Notification!
    Four Way Soul Mutation (Due to damage suffered by soul during accident that caused. Host’s rebirth, the soul absorbed all available energy to repair it. The energy of the four Edicts; Death, Destruction, Fate and Life were the only energy available to it during the rebirth process therefore it absorbed a . lot of it causing the soul to experience a mutation in these four edicts) [Soul Mutate of the Edicts of Death, Destruction, Fate, Life]

    It was as if the system understood him. It had explained the reason why his soul mutated. But unlike the original protagonist whose soul mutate was of the four basic elements, his was the four edicts which was of a higher level. Does that mean he would be a Sovereign if he was able to achieve the high god realm in all elements? What if he became a paragon of all the edicts?

    These questions couldn’t be answered unless he experimented it on his own. Now what he needed to do was slaughter his way up the food chain.

    This undead body of the current Sauron could absorb undead bloodlines to continue to evolve. His innate skills as well as future strength will depend of the accumulation of different unique bloodlines. Slaughtering is now the simplest way of advancement for him. As long as he accumulates enough bloodlines, he could change his current shape.

    “Very strange ability… I don’t remember all undead having this ability. Does this have something to do with my soul mutation?”

    Sauron couldn’t figure why he developed such ability but he believed that as long as he was strong enough, he could figure it out.

    Now with all these advantages, he believed it wouldn’t take long for him to stand at the top of this world. After killing these four Undead Skeletons, his soul sense which was five times stronger than other Undead at the same stage got even stronger. He also inherited a beginner Death Sword Skill. Now what he needed to do was find a quiet place to practice this still to boost his battle efficiency so he cleaned up the battlefield and left to find and secluded place to practice.

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