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  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-16/
    the aura of frigidity emanating from the white faire

        →fire

    Hegemon Brightshore had no hidea
        → idea
    we’ll meet again in the JAdefire Realm!
        → Jadefire
  • edited December 2017
    http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-22
    That way, it can be even be said that we are on friendly terms with each other!
       → "it can even be said that"

    http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-23/
    There’s no way they are going to pay me nor.
       → now
  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-24/
    he even managed to onvince that idiot

       → convince

    http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-25/
    D you really think I’m afraid of you?
       → Do
  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-26/
    Ning was quites killed in the Dao of Thunder.
       → "quite skilled"

    http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-37-chapter-27/
    unleash such an attck;
       → attack
    one of the prison gaolers introduced it to us and sait that it was incredibly strong.

       → said

  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-1/
    The techniques governinig the prison regions were all quite complex.

       → governing

  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-2/
    one could see a fragile-looking you seated in the air in the lotus position.
       → "youth"
  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-8/
    he had received difference from even Hegemons and Otherverse Lords
       → "deference" maybe ?
    the Icpeeak Army’s might.

       → Icepeak

  • edited January 7

    ```After slaughtering Hegemon Winterflame, Ning had chosen to work in simpler Daos such as that of Metal, Wood, and Earth, so that he would more quickly acquire the treasure reward. He personally wanted to study the Dao of Time, but judging from how he had spent more than two hundred chaos cycles working on the Dao of Space, he felt likely that he would need to spend even more time on Time.

    In the end, he was a sword cultivator. As a result, he was quite quick with the Dao of Metal, making his breakthrough in just twenty or so chaos cycles. He wasn’t very talented in the Dao of Wood, and so he spent more than fifty chaos cycles on it. As for the final member of the Five Elements, ‘Earth’? Thanks to the fact that he had already mastered the first four, he had actually managed to complete his mastery of it in just ten or so chaos cycles.

    In just ninety ‘real’ chaos cycles (9000 chaos cycles for him), he had actually managed to create three Archon-class techniques.```

    http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-22/


    Is what's between the parentheses added by Ren? I didn't find it when I checked the MTL and It doesn't make much sense, the reason Ning chose to work on Metal, Wood and Earth was that he would take much less time working on simple Daos like them than he would take working on Time, which was compared to Space. Ning had taken 200 Chaos Cycles of accelerated time, or 2 CCs of real time to reach the Archon level in it, Time shouldn't take that much longer, and wouldn't be longer than Formations, so it'd be between 200 and 800 CCs (2 and 8 CCs in real time) and the 3 he chose wouldn't take longer than he took with Space which was stated to be quite complex. 

    If he really took that long to reach the Archon level in those 3 that would mean they're much more complicated than the Dao of Formations which he only took 800 Chaos Cycles of accelerated time with, or 8 CCs of real time, or that he's that bad with them, which shouldn't be the case since It said he was quite quick with Metal due to being a Sword Cultivator.

  • There seems to be some discrepancies with the time in B38 C22, first it says 10 Chaos Cycles passed which means 1000 passed for Ning, then it lists the time he took to reach the Archon level in the final 3 Daos which rounds up to 90 CCs but then says that mean it's 900 for him, when he should've been under 100x time acceleration.

    I've checked the mtl and it seems to me like the 1000 Chaos Cycles is the time that passed since he first started the whole process of studying the Daos and creating the techniques, while the 90 is just part of that and was referring to the accelerated time that actually passed for Ning's Primal twin
  • edited January 9
    Edit: It seems like this got double posted somehow. I had even made it before the one with the quote above, but it went into moderation for some reason, probably because it's my first post and it had a link, or that I mentioned MTL ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

    There seems to be some discrepancies with the time in B38 C22, first it says 10 Chaos Cycles passed which means 1000 passed for Ning, then it lists the time he took to reach the Archon level in the final 3 Daos which rounds up to 90 CCs but then says that mean it's 900 for him, when he should've been under 100x time acceleration.

    I've checked the mtl and it seems to me like the 1000 Chaos Cycles is the time that passed since he first started the whole process of studying the Daos and creating the techniques, while the 90 is just part of that and was referring to the accelerated time that actually passed for Ning's Primal twin
  • edited January 9
    “The place is that dangerous?” Ning was surprised.
    “The Chaosverse is filled with countless marvels as well as many incredibly dangerous places. However, the Chaosverse is so fast that it’s hard to even locate those places unless you know exactly where they are,” Realmslord Windgrace said.

    Should be vast instead. B38 C26

  • edited January 10

    In B38 C28:

    Emperor Melobo’s gaze grew dim. His soul was shattered, and he perished on the part.
    Should be 'on the spot'.


    In B38 C29:

    Everything was Ning willed it
    Should be 'Everything was as Ning willed it'

    Archon-class techniques for the Daos of Space, Formations, Space, Time, Karma, and more.
    Space is mentioned twice.
  • In B38 C31 

    The Icewing Sea could be described in one word – cold!
    Should be Icewind
  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-32/
    we might even find a Daomerge Fircloud Fruit.

        → Firecloud

  • In B38 C34:

    The ice here was so tough that if he didn’t use his Darknorth swords, he’d need to use roughly 50% of his full power to break through it.
    Should be Northbow.
    The Sourcewalker had even lots his helmet
    Should be lost

  • http://www.wuxiaworld.com/desolate-era-index/de-book-38-chapter-42/
    Ning could sense the growth of the Flower of Eterniety

       → Eternity

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